Monday, 10 April 2017


Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
Title - What you will be explaining
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Why People Need to Drink Water
Water? People over the world need to drink water. People are often drinking fizzy drinks every now and then. Athletes like to drink a lot of water and over fills there body with water. When babies are still in their mums stomach 75%hjfhjd of water is in there bodys. When babies have their first birthday they drop from 75% to 65% of water in there bodys
1st element
Prevents cancer -

.breast cancer

.colon cancer

.flush bad cancer  

2nd element

Helps your brain

. It helps you to do your learning

. It helps you to do the right thing

. It helps you to cross trate  

3rd element

Help headaches -

. it helps you with your anger management

. It helps you to calm down

I leant that water has a cycle and that cycle goes over and over again

About water= Water is great for you because it help you with your work and your attitude to other thing is great for is to run and when you and thirsty you can drink water and that mean

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