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Monday 10 April 2017

Lanzie

Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
Why People Need to Drink Water
Introduction
Water? People over the world need to drink water. People are often drinking fizzy drinks every now and then. Athletes like to drink a lot of water and over fills there body with water. When babies are still in their mums stomach 75%hjfhjd of water is in there bodys. When babies have their first birthday they drop from 75% to 65% of water in there bodys
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Information
1st element
Prevents cancer -

.breast cancer

.colon cancer

.flush bad cancer  






Information
2nd element


Helps your brain

. It helps you to do your learning

. It helps you to do the right thing

. It helps you to cross trate  



Information
3rd element

Help headaches -

. it helps you with your anger management

. It helps you to calm down





Conclusion
I leant that water has a cycle and that cycle goes over and over again






About water= Water is great for you because it help you with your work and your attitude to other thing is great for is to run and when you and thirsty you can drink water and that mean

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