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Tuesday 30 August 2016

Lanzie Sentence types

On a sunny day my skin was sunburned.  Called Lanzie. He was 24 years old he was a nice man when ever he get lot’s of fish he give them to his family and his friends.When his family say’s thank you he thinks that he is the nice in the family but do you know what. All of their family is kind to him as well.But on evening morning Lanzie went to the sea there was. Nobody was there fishing it was only him with the boat just standing there just doing nothing. So when the sun came up he starting fishing because that mean to him that it is a good luck. That he might get lot of fish and when he got it he miss it and he was angry. Clenching my fist i could feel my fist felt as if it my take off on i t’s own so he said to himself that he will go  home and stay home.

1 comment:

  1. Lanzie the way you have shown your anger by writing about the clenched fist but should these sentences be included in this piece of writing??

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