Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Thursday, 30 July 2015
Thursday, 2 July 2015
Lanzie Explaining Your Thinking & Understanding
I have to create a picture of my game and it called the death zone you have to play the game and if you don t you will lose early but if you want to play my game in the ran day it fun.
I know how to do this it was so cool that if you have play it it will blow your mind.
Monday, 29 June 2015
How to make a poppy
WALT: We are learning to give step by step instructions of how to make a poppy.
Thursday, 7 May 2015
MY ANZAC writing
P2 So when they said that we never ever going back to our Family because they have lots and we do to but they said let fight for our countries and i will go and get the samoan people when they said let to that so we can save them our they will get kill from the Russian so they went to samoa and get some people and went with them to be safe.
P3 When they get back they start shooting the people said let us go to New zealand and they said be safe so they let them go when they go there we will get them back to samoa and they will be free so we will get them free all they will get kill when we shoot them and it will be one or two they will kill them to.
P4 When We will be die or not we will kill them let do this let go so ill stay in this hole until they will not shoot them when we all kill the Russian when we do we will go and get them back safely to New Zealand so let go back know so they did when they said let go back.
P5 When they came back the people did not look happy they think like that their son or husband and dad and are died when they were sad they said where is my son or my dad or my husband because so where is he so they said he is died so she said i'm going there to.
P6 When we were there they were crying so when we said let's call the people who fight for us that means we can name it like ANZAC day in Saturday, April 25 and let put it on monday to to remember them let do this okay so every day we have to let the school have an we can do this sometime to so that how we do it.
Thursday, 23 April 2015
My Holidays
In the Holiday in the first day we went to the pools we have to go on a car to go to magere pool. and we can do some bombing in there and when my little brother said hold me so he can jump i hold him when he said let go to. catch him when he jump i hold him as hard as i can. he said let go to the water slide i said to the man can we go together and he said yes. and when he was going to say go we went as fast as we can it was so cool that we had fun so we went back home. and my mum said did you have fun i said yes so when we got there we had some KFC so when we had some KFC we got a ball but i said let me have it but my little brother said no and siokita said no. but my mum said let the little have it and i said that not far but my mum gave me $50 and i said thank you. when we were eating i said let go to the shop and buy something when my mum said can i have $20. i said yes so when my dad said it time to go home know so we did and we went to the park and play and.ma when it was 8:00 we went back home and have a shower and went to sleep.
Thursday, 19 March 2015
2015 in camp
start writing: P1 We were so happy to go to camp because it was so fun when it was time to go to kayaking i was by myself on one boat and i was so scared that i want to jump off so i said to mr how can i turn to go back i said.
P2 To turn right and i did when Mr Burt said change over i came as a speed like are car going as 10000 kg mt so when mo said slow down but i said i can't slow down so mo came and stop me so i said thank you and mo said it my turn.
P3 So mo said give me a push so i did when mr burt said you can go for a swim but you have to take of your life jacket. and you can go for a swim when mr burt said you can have 1 minute swimming and when the minute was pass mr Burt said time to get out now.
P4 And we did so we went to kill zone and we have to vs miss lavakula and when mr j said you have to get water bombed so when we went and get water we got 20 and they got 19 so when we all got two each and we frew them and we hit some of them and we won the game and the next day we.
P5 Did cooking when we were doing some yummy food so me and bradley came and gave some food to the people how did came to camp in the all stars so we have to do only one more food to give to him so me and angelo and bradley. came with me so i gave it to him so when we went back they were sing song and we came in and sing so when it was finished we need to go for dinner so we did.
P 6 We went to gi pool for our swim and we have to have a shower so when me and Desmond we were playing in the pool so when it was time to go for a shower and when it was time for shower we have 4 minutes left for a shower so in we went and we have to get our shampoo and i was the first one in the shower so when we were done we went back and play soccer with miss TiTo and when we were winning they came up and said it time to go to sleep.
P7 when it was friday it was time to go to magree pool and swim when it was time to go we were the first one there but it take a half hour to get there and when they said do you want to eat apple.
P8 And i said no thank you when it was time to go to the pools we have to go and change when we were in the changing rooms we had morning tea and then we went inside the pool when the slide was open we slide down it was so fun because it cool to slide down when it was lunch time.
P9 Mr somerville said how want to go and do some bombed in the deep pool and i said me me and people ran as fast as they could and we can do bombed in the pool and it was so fun we have one more then it will be close and we went into the slide one more time and then we went back to school and then it was time to go home.
P10
it was so fun to go to camp because it was fun to go to the swimming pool i hope we have camp again.
Friday, 5 December 2014
my writing
One time a named called Mary sat on a chair and on night a fairy came and told Mary that she is having a baby and when Joseph came to his house that Mary said that god gave us Jesus to look after when Joseph thick a mint he went to sleep and the angel came and said in his dream god gave Mary Jesus curs to look after can you look after Mary please and when Joseph woke up he went to Mary and they went to Bethlehem when they got there they have to tell the innkeeper but the innkeeper said that his have any room and they went to the farm and they did and jesus got born in the farm the end
Monday, 22 September 2014
Tuesday, 16 September 2014
Lanzie writeing
welcome to Antarctica it is so cold and so freeze and cold and it is so cold then you will freeze in ice and you will see the Antarctic place and it so cold you might froze in ice the end
Thursday, 14 August 2014
Wednesday, 30 July 2014
Lanzie Alex
The Medal Winners
We found out last week that there are at least 17 sports at the Glasgow Commonwealth Games. So far New Zealand have won 27 medals. These include 8 gold medals, 8 silver medals and 11 bronze medals.
Task 1: In pairs go to thecgf.com website.
- Find the results tab
- click on find by country
- click on 2014 Commonwealth Games
- Choose one of the sports where a medal has been won
Task 2: In pairs make a written and illustrated presentation of this sport and the person or team which won the medal.
To consider:
- Profile of the sport
- Profile of the sports person/team
- images/video links to support your findings
Start your writing here:
The mens teams sprint is the event they raced in to win gold.
The 3 men in the team Sam Webster. Eddie Dawkins, Ethan Mitchell.
Tuesday, 10 June 2014
about my aunty
My aunty can do anything. She can help me do my homework and she gives me money. When she was with Roofie she said “Sit dog”. My dog will sit. My aunty bought me that dog and it can bite. But my aunt said “don't bite” and she said that again. She said don't bite and the dog didn’t bite. She is so cool to have her in my family. She is the best aunt in the whole entire world. I love my family too and I love my little brother. I hope you enjoyed my story.
Tuesday, 27 May 2014
In the weekend
In the weekend we went to my brother house because they have a new van and when we went inside to the van it was amazing and there a plate and cups and wine we had wine and it tacet yumm and when my brother said let go to mishdenbay and we all said yes and we went to mihdenbay and we had a swim and it was so cold and when we move around we got warm and warm and we ate takeaway after that we went home and sleep and im am so funny and that is my story god bless you everyone.
Wednesday, 19 March 2014
Valentines
Hi everyone have you ever been to valentines? Because I did. Do you want some food? If you want to leave a comment on my blog and I do some more learning you will be my friend. Good bye and be good to your friends and be nice to everyone.
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)


